Question

10．Write at least 60words on the topic"My mother's daily life"．
（寫一篇至少60個(gè)單詞題為"我媽媽的日常生活"的短文，標(biāo)點(diǎn)符號(hào)不占格）
Suggested questions：
•What is your mother's job？
•What does your mother usually do in the morning/after work…？
•What do you think of your mother？
                                                    

Answer 1

分析 高分句型一
 She has lunch in the hospital，but she never talks when she has lunch．她在醫(yī)院吃午飯，但她吃飯時(shí)從不說(shuō)話．這是when引導(dǎo)的時(shí)間狀語(yǔ)從句，當(dāng)…時(shí)候．   
高分句型二
 she still tries her best to make people healthy．她仍然盡力使人們健康．try one's best to do sth．盡某人最大的努力做某事．

解答 My mother is a doctor．She is hard-working．【要點(diǎn)一，媽媽的工作】She always goes to work at six o'clock and comes back home at eight o'clock．She has breakfast at 5：10 a．m．She often has a long break in the afternoon，for about one to two hours．She has lunch in the hospital，but she never talks when she has lunch【高分句型一，注意時(shí)間狀語(yǔ)從句的使用】．She has dinner when she comes back．During working，she works attentionally．Although she is not a famous doctor，she still tries her best to make people healthy【高分句型二，try one's best to do sth．的使用】【要點(diǎn)二，媽媽的日常生活】．She is a good doctor，and she is a good mother，too．【要點(diǎn)三，你覺(jué)得媽媽怎么樣】

點(diǎn)評(píng) 本篇寫作需注意要求中所提供的要點(diǎn)，不可遺漏．需在平時(shí)積累相關(guān)的詞匯，寫作中注意語(yǔ)義通順，符合邏輯關(guān)系．上下文之間可以適當(dāng)使用連接詞．如but，so，then等．