Question

短文寫作（25分）
中央號召創(chuàng)建節(jié)約型社會(huì)，可是許多校園內(nèi)部浪費(fèi)現(xiàn)象嚴(yán)重。請你在班會(huì)課上發(fā)表演講，號召同學(xué)們從我做起，杜絕浪費(fèi)。
提示：浪費(fèi)現(xiàn)象：水、電；餐廳的食物；其他。
危害：自身性格；父母財(cái)政負(fù)擔(dān)；自然資源。
制止浪費(fèi)現(xiàn)象的措施：由自己設(shè)想
注意：1．詞數(shù)130左右；演講的開頭和結(jié)尾已寫好，不記人總詞數(shù)。
2．不要逐字逐條翻譯，要組成一篇通順連貫的短文。

Answer 1

When I first learned to write in English，I run into many difficulties.The main problem was in that I always thought in Chinese but tried to translate everything into Chinese.My teacher advised me to keep diaries.I followed her advices.Happily it worked.Soon I began to enjoy talk to myself on paper as I was learning to express me in simple English.One day I wrote a short story and showed it my teacher.She liked it very much that she read it to the class.Everyone said the story was the good one.I was great encouraged by their words.

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